Honest Story Reviewer

I really like this story. It has a good story line going on.

My only issues with it is
a) The characters need better descriptions, not just who they are, but their personality.
b) NEVER EVER EVER insert a polyvore outfit, it looks stupid. Imagine this is a book, you can't do that in a book!!! Describe the outfit.
c) you don't update often, which can cause you to lose viewers..

But other than that, I love it, keep up the good work love. :)

Rate: 8.5

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