
Broken
Chapter 4
Louis' P.O.V.
She looked pained when I pulled away. Maybe she liked me? I don't know. I leaned in again, but her eyes widened and she got up and walked out of the room, slamming the door behind her.
There goes my chances. ‘Nice one, Tomlinson,’ I think to myself. ‘you just blew your chances with her. She’ll never trust you again!’
I almost cry. Almost.
Liam's P.O.V
I'm still in the living room. I haven't started to cry yet, but the tears are threatening to spill. The worst part is, everything she said was true. She’s totally right. I don't know anything about her anymore. I wonder if she still likes Coke. Or marshmallows? She used to have an obsession with those when she was little. I haven't seen her since she was 12. Yeah, I was busy, but instead of visiting her, I was hanging out with the lads or Sophia. And now I feel really bad.
"Liam?" I turn around. It’s Traci.
"Yeah Traci?" I ask.
"I-"
I cut her off.
"Look Traci, I'm really sorry. You're totally right about everything. I haven't been there for you. And believe me, I feel really bad. I would hate me too. So, please just forgive me? And, tell me everything. Please. I want to help."
I grab her wrists and she flinches. The worry must have shown in my face because she smiles painfully.
"Okay Liam. I forgive you. But just do one thing for me."
"Anything!” I exclaim.
"Don't ever leave me again.”
Notes
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