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Broken

Chapter 3

Traci's P.O.V
I was so confused. I had always had a sort-of thing for Louis Tomlinson, but I never thought that he would KISS ME! For god’s sake, he was my brother’s bandmate! Liam barely allowed any of them to touch me!

Louis' P.O.V

She seemed kind of surprised when I kissed her. She took a while to even respond. What if I just ruined everything by kissing her? What if she wasn’t ready? What if she didn’t like me? Hell, I can't even believe I thought I had a chance with her! I’m such a fucking moron! I'm Louis freaking Tomlinson. I can get a girl if I want to, ya know? But Traci is different. She doesn't squeal when we sees us. She doesn’t claim to be our “#1 fan”, even if Liam is in the band. I honestly think that she doesn't even like One Direction, just (some) of the people in it.
She is so lonely though. I mean, she doesn't really have any friends. I guess she’s been too depressed to make friends. I could be an amazing best friend if she let me. But she’s so secluded; I don't think she wants any friends. I broke the kiss, mentally cursing myself for being so stupid.

Traci's P.O.V

Did he really just pull away? Here I am, thinking that I'm actually wanted for once. I guess I was just being naïve, like always. No guy will ever want me.
Well, fuck you Louis, and your muscles and hair and face. I will never kiss you or think about you again. I hate Liam, for not being there when I needed him. I hate Harry, Niall, and Zayn for rushing to Liam's aid, when I was the one depressed. I’m not sure, right now, how I feel about Louis.
I’m all mixed up inside.



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Comments

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#59325 #59325
6/28/14

@Lizard The Wizard
lol same!! wattpad can make a person go mad haha
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5/31/14

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4/8/14

@Love_Life3
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