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Young Minds, Young Love

Chapter 1

Avery's P.O.V

I stare out the car window and watch the world pass me by. I say goodbye to my old life and welcome my new life; I never wanted to move but it was all because of my dad

Flashback
"HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME DAN! HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!" My mum's been yelling at dad ever since he told her something an hour ago. They've been at it like cats and dogs and I think that Im going to explode if they don't stop. "Babe, come on..." "DON'T YOU DARE 'BABE COME ON' ME! YOU'VE BEEN SEEING THIS WHORE BEHIND MY BACK NOW FOR HOW LONG AND YOUR'RE ONLY TELLING ME NOW?! THIS IS NOT WHAT YOU DO WHEN YOUR MARRIED TO THE ONE THAT YOU LOVE!" At least i now know what they're fighting about. "YOU KNOW WHAT. I CAN'T FUCKING DO THIS WITH YOU ANY-" "YOU CAN'T DO THIS WITH ME ANYMORE?! NO! I CANNOT DO THIS WITH YOU-" "I HAVE A NEW FAMILY ON THE WAY AND YOU KNOW WHAT MARY, I SHOULD BE AT HOME WITH SIENNA TAKING CARE OF HER BEFORE THE BABY COMES! SIENNA ACTUALLY MAKES ME FEEL AGAIN AND OUR NEW FAMILY THAT'S ON THE WAY THEY'RE A WHOLE LOT BETTER THAN THIS SAD EXCUSE YOU CALL A FAMILY!"

There were a few seconds of silence before i heard a very loud SLAP. I guess she must have hit him pretty fucking hard if i could hear it. After the slap, it was quiet for about twenty minutes before i heard the front door open and then roughly slamed shut. That's when i knew that the man that i called my 'dad' had walked out on us. I didn't even get a goodbye. Instead i got called a 'sad excuse'

End of Flashback

I hate it when those memories crawl their way back into my mind. The more i look at this little town the more i begin to emurse myself, with the simplicity of it all; maybe moving to Holmes chapel wasn't such a bad idea. I was pulled out of my trance as my mum was constantly poking me. "What mum?!" I didnt mean to snap at her but I hate it when people poke me. "I was just letting you know that the truck should be here soon, so you can unpack your boxes tonight." Great that's just what i want to be doing tonight. "Yes mum." "Remember that you also have to get yourself ready for school tomorrow morning, so don't go to bed too late otherwise you wont be able to get yourself up for school tomorrow morning" Ehhhhh.great.school

*Next Morning*

Mum really was right...i should've gone to bed early...now time to get ready for school.
I really hate my school uniform; I have ti wear a navy blue skirt that comes to my mid thigh as well as a white button up shirt that's almost see throug! Im almost positive that if I were to stand outside in the rain, you would be able to see every inch of my bra. Once ready I make my way downstairs to get myself some breakfast, as Im about to make myself some breakfast; my mum comes past me with a pile of dirty clothes to be washed. "Does it now occur to you that I might need some help?" I don't know if I should answer her or just let her get it out. "Well are you going to help me?...or do you think that getting yourself ready in the morning is enough?" I hate it when she get's like this, "I think I'll walk to school this morning." I honestly don't think that i would be able to stand a car ride to school with her at this time in the morning. "Fine. Go. I'll see you later when I get home from work tonight"

As soon as she said those words I was out the door. The morning walk to school was really good; the crisp morning air being just what i needed. When I arrived at the school it was massive! There were kids everywhere! You could see all of your typical groups there but one caught my eye. All of the guys were full of tattoo's and were smoking. One of the guys really caught my eye though..I don't know what it was but it felt as if my insides were doing flips. It may have been those green eyes or the the tattoo's...maybe even the whole 'bad boy' thing that he had going on. I didn't realise how long i was staring at the guy beofre his eyes meet mine, I noticed that his lips started to curve up and his left eye drop into a wink

Notes

Ok so there it is...my first capter...I hope that all of you lovely people that read it comment and subscribe:) xx

Comments

@imfuckedup
Hahaha I'm glade that you were shocked, I was hoping people would get the impression that she was pregnant but then be shocked because they are married. If you think Jessica is bad now...just wait until a little later in the story, she is going to be causing a LOT of drama;P Thanks for your beautiful comment!:) xx

OMG you don't know how shocked i am! I mean I thought it'll be a big deal what Avery's mom wanted to tell but I have never expected this! I think if i were Avery I would be really pissed so I admire Avery's behaviour ! She's so nice to everyone so wow . BUT HOLY HELL JESSICA IS THE BIGGEST BITCH I HAVE EVER SEEN! She annoys me as fuck! I hope Avery will punch her in the fucking face! I just literally can't find words to describe how much i hate her!
And the date omg Harry and Avery .. jeez i dunno what to say. They are so fucking adorable together and i hope Avery will say yes! COZ I WILL DIE! But .. God! WHEN HARRY ASKED IF ANYONE TOUCHED AVERY I HE WAS SUPER DUPER CUTE AND I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF HIM! He is cheeky, pervert , badass ( haha) , sexy, cute, and adorable at the same time! I NEED HIM SO MUCH ! AVERY IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE HIM
To sum up I loved this chapter ! It was so well written and I'm still not over the fact how many things happend! I can't wait for the next !
Oh and one more thing : sorry if this whole comment is nonsense but I am shocked and i can't think at the moment!
xx

Update soon I L-O-V-E it!

WritingAddict55 WritingAddict55
5/27/14

No prob! This is deffenetly my FAV fanfic i've EVER read!!!

It's_Chels :D It's_Chels :D
5/26/14