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Grammar- 5.0 You are missing certain punctuation every noe now and then, and dont always spell things correctly. Try adding more paragraphs to separate dialogue.

Storyline- 6.5
Original and I love the idea, but it seems a little unrealistic and a little rushed. I love the idea though!

Writing Skills- 8.1
Add a little more details. The hook is a little over used, but keep up the good work!

Advertisement/Display- 7.3
Cover Art could use some work, along with the Short Description, but the summary is amazayn

Calculated Rating- 6.7
Oppiniated Rating- 8.1

Overall Rating- 7.4
Should I Read This?- Yes

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