Why Me ???
Chapter 1
Kaitlyn's POV
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!!"says mom. I actually thought she planned all of this for me. Who am i kidding she could never pull any of this off or pay for half of this. It was all dad he knows me way better than mom does ,but it is my 18th birthday i can't strees this. I'll just have fun at my party
"KAITLYN!!!!!!!!!" Erin screamed. I jumped up out of my seat and hugged her so tight she is the only person that has been there for me my whole life and she is the one to thank for everything.
" ERIN omg thank you for everything that you helped me with and for being there for me when no one else was". She thanked me and brought me over to speak. Everyone from school was at my party so was my entire family I had to thank everyone except for the one person who toke credit for something she didnt do... my mother.
" Hi everyone i cant believe this is happening to me, i am finally 18!!!!!" everyone clapped." I would like to thank my dad for everything and all of this i am very greatful so thank you and i love you next i would like to thank my best friend in the whole entire world Erin Clark and my family, thank you and i love you all". My dress was amazing Mom said she picked it out but i know she didnt and plus she cant afford something this expensive. Omg that was breath taking i cant believe i didnt throw up. I went back to my table i didnt notice what was behind me everyone was walking towards me. I turned around and they had this amazing cake with my name on it with all of my paintings and drawings printed on it. As soon as i knew it my eyes started to tear up everyone started singing to me.
Ater the party i finally got home and erin was sleeping over i just wanted to sleep mom and dad brought in all of the presents and i headed upstairs. I got to my room and on the dresser was a box. Erin and I looked at each other then ran downstairs with it. "Mom Dad what is this?" They looked at each other then looked back at us." Open it" they said it insync. I toke off the bow and opened the box to reveal two one direction tickets along with the meet and greet passes!!!!!!!! "OMG AHHHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU" i ran over and hugged the both of them. I was way to happy to care who payed i was way to happy. I looked at the tickets and they were schelduled during spring break perfect. It was going to be the best spring break ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!!"says mom. I actually thought she planned all of this for me. Who am i kidding she could never pull any of this off or pay for half of this. It was all dad he knows me way better than mom does ,but it is my 18th birthday i can't strees this. I'll just have fun at my party
"KAITLYN!!!!!!!!!" Erin screamed. I jumped up out of my seat and hugged her so tight she is the only person that has been there for me my whole life and she is the one to thank for everything.
" ERIN omg thank you for everything that you helped me with and for being there for me when no one else was". She thanked me and brought me over to speak. Everyone from school was at my party so was my entire family I had to thank everyone except for the one person who toke credit for something she didnt do... my mother.
" Hi everyone i cant believe this is happening to me, i am finally 18!!!!!" everyone clapped." I would like to thank my dad for everything and all of this i am very greatful so thank you and i love you next i would like to thank my best friend in the whole entire world Erin Clark and my family, thank you and i love you all". My dress was amazing Mom said she picked it out but i know she didnt and plus she cant afford something this expensive. Omg that was breath taking i cant believe i didnt throw up. I went back to my table i didnt notice what was behind me everyone was walking towards me. I turned around and they had this amazing cake with my name on it with all of my paintings and drawings printed on it. As soon as i knew it my eyes started to tear up everyone started singing to me.
Ater the party i finally got home and erin was sleeping over i just wanted to sleep mom and dad brought in all of the presents and i headed upstairs. I got to my room and on the dresser was a box. Erin and I looked at each other then ran downstairs with it. "Mom Dad what is this?" They looked at each other then looked back at us." Open it" they said it insync. I toke off the bow and opened the box to reveal two one direction tickets along with the meet and greet passes!!!!!!!! "OMG AHHHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU" i ran over and hugged the both of them. I was way to happy to care who payed i was way to happy. I looked at the tickets and they were schelduled during spring break perfect. It was going to be the best spring break ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Notes
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You have a lot of grammatical errors, so you need to work on that, but I'm sure that the story will be great, it just needs to make more sense.
9/2/14