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THE DEVIL IN DISGUISE

OK I'M ONLY ON CHAPTER 1 AND I HAVE A LOT TO SAY. IT IS NO SAME OLD EX BOYFRIEND COMES IN TO KILL HER WITCH WE ALL KNOW WE HAVE ALL DONE IT. THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD. HERE IT IS. AND AT THE END OF THE 1ST CHAPTER THEN IT TELLS YOU WHAT IT IS ABOUT. CHAPTER 2 IT GIVES A LOT OF DETAILS ABOUT WHERE THEY ARE AND WHAT THEY ARE DOING SO I GIVE THIS A PERFECT 10

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Hi!! Can you review my story 'Almost' please? It's new my has two chappys. :D

Niall Is Awesome
4/12/14

Can you please review my story "Little Things and Angel Wings" ????

DirectionDreamer
3/29/14

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I updated Sturmflut so feel free to check the story out.

TheKat
3/23/14

@Niall and Harry's Girl
its ok i couldnt get on here on my laptop yesterday im on my sisters computer can we do it tomorrow incase i cant get on there on my laptop again?