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ONLY ONE YEAR TO LIVE

ok so i like the plot of this story but it needs to draw the readers attenton in. you have to use more creative words. like insted of cry use sobbed . and if you get off one topic in one p.o.v get to a diffrent topic in another p.o.v so i give this story a 6

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Hi!! Can you review my story 'Almost' please? It's new my has two chappys. :D

Niall Is Awesome
4/12/14

Can you please review my story "Little Things and Angel Wings" ????

DirectionDreamer
3/29/14

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I updated Sturmflut so feel free to check the story out.

TheKat
3/23/14

@Niall and Harry's Girl
its ok i couldnt get on here on my laptop yesterday im on my sisters computer can we do it tomorrow incase i cant get on there on my laptop again?