
STORY REVIEWS
THE UNKNOWN FALL
SO THIS IS THE OUT OF THE ORIDANARY plane crash story um so this story has alot of details and long chapters so that is a bonus. one thing i don't like is that it has alot of charaters so if you have minor charaters you should put in their names and just not put it in the chaters just put it into the story suddle so i give it an 8
Hi!! Can you review my story 'Almost' please? It's new my has two chappys. :D
4/12/14