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the problem *on hold*

chapter seven





louis P.O.V

(back to Starbucks when they met)



i looked around the Starbucks, finishing my blood frappuccino when my gaze fell on them a couple ordering some drinks, it was not there blood beating through their veins (though that did help) it was the girl, she was absolutely breathtaking and i knew immediately i needed to protect her even if it meant kidnapping her.
she turned my way after that boy who was in my way left to go to the bathroom and i ran so i was near her in what she must have found as an instant and asked her a few questions and found out she was 22, her name was Jessica, and she has a letter :( not that it matters
just then her boy-toy returned and they left and i plotted

(a few minutes before Jessica and harry return home)
something not many people know is that i can control humans from afar as long as i have met them before all i have to do is tune into them for a while first, so i tuned into her soon to be ex-boyfriend and watched while i slowly gained control "harry," she whispered "why wont you talk to me?"
and i gained all of his will "i have nothing to say to you." it was silent until they got to the house and he/I broke up with her she ran out and he gained control back but i still watched as he looked dumbfounded and ran out to try and catch her too explain but she was already long gone
i went to her and controlled her so she went to the park right by my house then i ran to her and said "you know crying humans are very unattractive as she processed me being there i knocked her out
(right before she gains conciseness)
i stared at her,so flawlessly sleeping in my bed (as she should) her brown,long hair gently caressing her cheeks her long lashes hiding from me her crystal blue eyes,but for only a second longer as she awakens.

Notes

longer than normal :) i hoped you guys liked it comment your opinions, oh and also which boy should be Louis' bodygaurd, Zayn, Niall or Liam? <3 <3 <3

Comments

I would love it if you would please update this story I know you haven't in a month, but I was hoping that this small message will inspire you enough to continue with your story. I have faith in your ability, my dear.

- Hawkins Xx

Well i think all of the boy should be the bodyguard and i love the story and whats gonna happen next

Love the story, and I think Niall should be his bodyguard.

UPDATE'Z ; )

Danielle72190 Danielle72190
1/28/14

@#44026 thats mean marianna u dont have to b like that just cause ur a belieber btw da beibs sucks :)

Louisgal77 Louisgal77
1/28/14