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Book reviews :D

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This ones two chapters too. Not much to off of but I'll try. It's got some spelling mistakes but everyone gets those. The chapters are kind of short so you might want to make them longer. It gets the reader more excited when the chapters are longer.

All around its ok. I think it needs some work but I think it'll get better as it goes.

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Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D
7/4/14

I would love it if you could check out my story Sturmflut. Right now only the prologue is up but there will be an update on Saturday.

TheKat TheKat
3/19/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Could you do "She Stole My Heart" please :)

five_little_things five_little_things
1/30/14
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