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Book reviews :D

Sweet disaster

There's only a few chapters so there's not much go off of.. I think the story's got great potential though. I would suggest trying not to skip around so much, like you would put in bold five minutes later or something like that. That's just my suggestion you don't have to to it.

Good of luck writing the rest of it! I'm sure it'll turn out great!

Notes

@ANormalGirl

Comments

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D
7/4/14

I would love it if you could check out my story Sturmflut. Right now only the prologue is up but there will be an update on Saturday.

TheKat TheKat
3/19/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Could you do "She Stole My Heart" please :)

five_little_things five_little_things
1/30/14
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