Book reviews :D
16 and pregnant
Ok so the story line is just fantastic! I love that you based it off of your life also. (Btw your little boy is the cutest thing I've ever seen!!)
The stories great but sometimes you'll call the characters by different names. Sometimes you call Harry, Justin. Sometimes you call Mia, Kelsey. And sometimes you call Josh, Jessie. It just gets a bit confusing when you do that so you might want to go back and fix that.
In some of your chapters there was no spacing and it was just clumped so that made it harder to read. Also spelling and punctuation mistakes but we all make those. (I know I do)
Over all the stories great, it just needs the name confusions to be changed. It's doing good and I can't wait to read more!
Notes
@Gabriella_Montano
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
7/4/14