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Book reviews :D

I Ran

Well... The storyline is good I'll give you that. There's just A LOT of spelling and punctuation errors. If you go back and fix those it'll help tie it up. Also when your characters speak you don't use quotes so that makes it hard to sort out the thoughts vs. what they are saying.

Try fixing that up and see where it goes from there :)

Notes

@DANIELLE HORAN

Comments

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D
7/4/14

I would love it if you could check out my story Sturmflut. Right now only the prologue is up but there will be an update on Saturday.

TheKat TheKat
3/19/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Will you please check out my story Perfect Two and the Sequel Perfect Disaster? Thx so much!

lifelovepeace4eva lifelovepeace4eva
2/26/14

Could you do "She Stole My Heart" please :)

five_little_things five_little_things
1/30/14
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