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One Chance *On Hold*

Chapter 21

**Louis’s POV**
“Well you’ll have to change that cause I’m full of surprises” Aria smiled before scurrying over to everyone else.
I swear this girl is going to make me go crazy. It’s like I find out something new that makes me like her even more every five minutes. Letting out a huff, I joined everyone as they headed into a souvenir shop.
I grabbed Harry and pulled him away from everyone. “I need your to help me with something” I said as an idea popped into my head.
“If it’s anything like last time-“
“No, not at all” I said with a slight laugh. That’s a memory I don’t even want to think about.
“Well what is it?” Harry asked.
“Okay, so I want to have a surprise dinner date with Aria tonight. You need to help me set everything up without her finding out.”
“I’ll help but what do you want me to do?”
“For now just distract Aria for long enough for me to tell everyone else about it then we can figure it out from their” I said and Harry agreed before we headed back to the group.
This has to be perfect! I need to learn more about her and I doubt she’ll be able to deny telling me things if I set up something amazing for her.
Harry walked over to Aria “I need help um picking out which sweat shirt to get, come tell me which you think is better” He said before practically pulling here to the other side of the shop.
“Okay, guys I need your help,” I started.

**Aria’s POV**
Harry and I were at the sweat shirt section for what felt like forever. That boy does not know how to make a decision. We finally joined back our group. “Where’s everyone else?” I asked since I didn’t see Louis, Liam, Dani, or Leah around.
“Um Liam lost his phone so there walking back to our spot on the beach to see if they can find it there” Niall explained.
“Oh, should we go help them?” I asked.
“No,” Jane quickly answered “We are um going to get lunch at this place that always has a long wait so were going to go wait while they look.”
I just nodded then followed them out of the shop. After walking for awhile we reach a busy, little restaurant.
“How many?” The host said as we stepped in.
“Ten” Harry answered.
“That’ll be around a forty minute wait” She said in a happy voice then headed back to whatever she was doing.

**Louis’s POV**
’40 minute wait –H’ I read off my phone; forty minutes for me to figure most of this out, then I will have to come up with another excuse after lunch to finish setting everything up.
“Okay, we have forty minutes” I announced to Leah, Liam, and Dani.
We finally found the place I wanted to have it. A little spot a few miles down from the crowded part of the beach. I could picture it in my head. “So you think she will like having dinner here, right?” I asked Leah.
“She’ll love it” Leah smiled.
I don’t know why but I am beyond nervous. I just want her to remember this night as perfect.
**
I lit the candles in the lanterns, before sitting down at the table and waiting for Aria to get here. My phone buzzed in my pocket and I pulled it out.
‘We just got into the cab, be there in a few minutes –H’
The plan was that the taxi would stop and Aria will get out first thinking nothing of it then she’ll notice all this as the taxi drives away with everyone else.
I stood up, grabbing the roses off the table, as the yellow car came into view. Everything went as planned she got out, the taxi pulled away, and then she noticed. I couldn’t see her expression, because she was still too far away.
She slipped off her sandal and ran down onto the beach. Her deep red hair was now it a braid and she changed out of her beach clothes into a second outfit that she brought with her. She looked amazing like always.

**Aria’s POV**
The second I noticed Louis I toke off my sandals and ran down to him, “Surprise” He said and pulled out a bundle of red rose from behind his back.
“Louis, what is all this” I asked with a smile.
“Our first official date” He replied and handed me the roses before leading me to the table. He pulled out my chair for me then went and sat across the table. “Well what do you think?” he asked.
“It’s perfect,” I said and he looked relieve “but any date with you would be perfect.”
Did I really just say that? That’s like the cheesiest line ever. He looked surprised by what I said. I glanced over the ocean; the sun had almost finished setting. Only a tiny bit of light peeked over the ocean making the clouds turn pink. It is beautiful.
Louis leaned over the table giving me a soft kiss before returning to our conversation. “Well, I kind of suck at cooking so,” he pulled out pizza from the picnic basket that was next to the table.
I couldn’t help, but giggle. “Thank you” I smiled before taking a bite.
We finished eating and went to sit down on the sand. The air was colder now, but it wasn’t anything like the cold back at home. Here it was just a refreshing chill. “Here” he said pulling off his jacket and handing it to me.
“Its fine I’m not that cold”
“I know, but I want to see you wearing my things” he said tilting his head slightly. I grabbed the jean jacket and slipped it on.
I looked up at all the stars; there wasn’t a cloud in the sky. “It’s so beautiful” I let out a breath into the chilly air.
“You’re so beautiful” Louis said and I turned my head to face him as heat rushed to my face.
His eyes were still so bright even though it’s so dark out. There was about an inch of space between us. I brought my hand to his and locked my figures around his. “You make me really happy, Louis” I said before resting my head on his shoulder.
Louis and I sat there, not talking, just enjoying each other’s company and the view.
This has defiantly been the perfect date.

Notes

Sorry its been a few days since I've updated. I've just been busy.
But anyways, What do you think?!
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Comments

@LouisLady



@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
I agree with both of you its just to good to come to an end soooooo fast. PLZ keep going.

@LouisLady
I agree this story is to good to come to a end so quickly xxx

I love this story and checking everyday for an update. I'd rather wait for your writer's block to clear and continue on. Just love this story.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/21/14

please try, sorry if I sound demanding.

It was perfect.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/6/14