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One Chance *On Hold*

Chapter 10

**Louis’s POV**
After Harry and Niall bugging me for at least twenty minutes I finally just gave in to get them to leave me alone. A grabbed a girl who was cute, not even close to being as stunning as Aria but she’ll do, I started snogging her. Out of nowhere she was pushed away from me.
“What the hell?” the girl screamed in a pitchy voice.
I looked to the one she was talking to. Aria. Are you fucking kidding me? The whole night I have been sitting around thinking about her and the second I kiss another girl to get Niall and Harry to leave me alone she walks in. She said something in an even bitchy tone than she usually talks to me in to the girl.
She looks at me with an unreadable expression.“Thanks for that. Now I know you’re a complete waste of my time.”
I couldn’t even get out a simply ‘sorry’ before she stormed out of the house. No, no, no. This couldn’t be happening. I sprinted out of the house into the yard getting burst with rain the second I passed the door. By the time I reached the road they were already gone.
“Fucking-“ I let out a scream, clenching my fists.
I felt someone put their hand on my shoulder. “What?” I yelled.
“Lou, just calm down” Harry said.
“Why? I just fucking lost my chance, Harry” I shouted and now the other boys were around.
I felt like I’m about to explode. All I want is to talk to Aria, explain myself to her. I turned away from the boy and started walking back toward the flat. It was probably about a ten minute walk and the rain wasn’t helping, but my phone was dead and I didn’t know if Aria was even going back to her house so only good option.
A mix of voices shouted behind me. I stumbled a bit as I walked down the road, but with all the drink I’ve done and the angry, the alcohol wasn’t effecting my too much; everything was just a little foggy.
When I finally got inside I was soaked. I plugged in my phone before stripping off the wet clothes. I pulled on a pair of boxers then collapsed onto my bed. My phone light up and I grabbed it.
Two message both in my group message with the boys:
Liam: You’ll get her back just give her a little time. -L
Harry: Liams right just call her in the morning or something –H
I didn’t respond. Instead I called Aria. No answer. I called again and still no answer. Damn it, why can’t I just be more like Liam and Zayn.
‘Aria if you just let me explain I swear I can fix this. Just please answer me. Xx –L’

**Aria’s POV**
I read Louis text over and over again, trying to decide if I should text back or not. Finally I just slipped my phone back into my pocket. I had already had gone back to my place and got changed now I am almost at Jake’s house.
We pulled up to his apartment building. Like most of the guys in my grade he lived in a flat with a few roommates. “Thanks for driving me here” I smiled at Leah.
“No problems, but you better tell me every detail of this tomorrow” She laughed as I stepped out of her car and quickly ran to the building. It is still pouring rain.
I knocked on his door and what I’m guessing is his roommate answered the door “Hello, who are you?” a tall guy with brown hair and dark brown eyes and an American accent said. I think he is in one or two of my classes, but I’ve never talked to him before.
“Um is Jake here?” I asked quietly.
“Yeah,” He said before turning and yelling “Jake, there’s a pretty girl at our door asking for you.” He turned back to me and smiled bringing his hand through his hair. “My name’s Ryan by the way” He said
“Well I’m Aria” I said just as Jake joined us.
“Sorry, I took so long” Jake said before gesturing me inside.

Notes

Sorry its kinda short, but the next one will be long to make up for it!
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@LouisLady



@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
I agree with both of you its just to good to come to an end soooooo fast. PLZ keep going.

@LouisLady
I agree this story is to good to come to a end so quickly xxx

I love this story and checking everyday for an update. I'd rather wait for your writer's block to clear and continue on. Just love this story.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/21/14

please try, sorry if I sound demanding.

It was perfect.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/6/14