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One Chance *On Hold*

Chapter 9


**Aria’s POV**
“Let’s go get coffee” Leah said as she pulled into the parking lot in front of a little café that I have never been to before, but its Leah’s favorite.
It had started to rain a bit while we were in the car so we quickly walked in trying to avoid getting wet. I was facing away from the counter toward Leah and Jane while we decided what we were ordering when I heard a slightly familiar voice.
“Aria” I turned around to see Jake. He was still a little bruised from what happened with Louis, but it was barely noticeable.
“Hey, Jake” I smiled.
“Sorry I haven’t texted you or anything. I lost my phone. I’m getting a new one either tonight or tomorrow so yeah” He rambled.
Honestly I haven’t even thought about that. “No worries” I said quickly before ordering.
We sat down at one of the open tables to wait. “So what’s up with you and Niall?” I asked Leah referring to how they were flirting the whole night.
She giggled then blushed “nothing really” Leah is the worst liar ever.
“Coffees” Jake interrupted as he sat a coffee down in front of each of us then we thanked him and he walked back to the counter. We got up from our table and hurried to the car through the rain, which was now coming down much harder.
“What’s yours say?” Jane questioned as she pointed to the little writing on it.
For the prettiest girl I’ve seen today’ was written on my cup in sloppy handwriting.
A smile grew on my face uncontrollably. “Aw” Leah and Jane said together.

**Louis POV**
We have only been at this party for like an hour, but I already want to leave. I tried to dance with girls, but I couldn’t even enjoy it. All I could think about was Aria and how I wish I was with her right now instead of these random drunk girls. Harry and Niall had already found girls to dance with and Zayn and Liam obviously had Perrie and Dani, so I have no one. Yeah there’s girls that come up and flirt with me but it not like I even want to talk to them.
“Harry,” I said pulling him away from a small blonde girl “I’m going to go back to your flat.” I am staying with Niall and Harry, because I my mom kicked me out for awhile and it was my best option.
“Lou, we just got here” He stumbled over his word obviously already drunk.
“I’m just not feeling it tonight” I huffed trying to find an excuse to leave.
“Nope, this was your idea so you are not leaving,” Harry said “Lets go take some shot”
Harry practically forced me into the kitchen where people were already pouring shot so he grabbed some for us. “Drink up” He said handing me the first shot. I downed it and then came the familiar burning feeling in my throat. We repeated this until we had each drank about five shots of I don’t know.
“Can I leave now?” I slurred out words a little.
“No,” Harry shouted before Niall came over.
“W-what’s going on?” Niall laughed in between his words. Oh gosh when Niall already laughed at practically anything and when he drinks it just makes it ten times worse.
“He’s trying to leave” Harry said loudly to Niall.
“C’mon lets go find you a girl, Lou” Niall said in a thicker than usually Irish accent.

**Aria’s POV**
“Why are you making me go to another fucking party?” I complained as I sat down in the car next to Leah.
“Because Jane can’t come and there’s no why I’m going alone,” She said as she pulled out of Jane’s driveway “and last time you came to a party with me you only let us stay for like twenty minutes. You owe me for that.”
That was the night I met Louis and everything change and only in twenty minutes. It was weird to think about it now. “Fine” I grieved.
It was only about five minutes till she pulled up to a house. I could hear the music without even having to step in the house yet.
“Let’s go!” Leah squealed as she pulled me inside.
The first thing my eyes landed on was a tall curly haired boy, Harry. If Harry is here Louis is probably here. My fucking luck.
Before I could ever turn around to leave I spotted Louis. He was snogging a girl a little taller than me with dark brown hair and was practically naked. I filled with rage in seconds. Without thinking I stormed over to them pushing the girl away from Louis”
“What the hell?” She shouted in a high pitch over.
“Sorry, Hun, looks like you’re going to have to find a different guys dick to suck tonight” I said then smiled.
She gave me an offended look before turning away and storming off. I turn to Louis. He just stared at me with a shocked expression.
I felt my stomach turn. For a second there I thought Louis wasn’t trying to use me; obviously I am wrong. “Thanks for that. Now I know you’re a complete waste of my time” is all I said before grabbing Leah and walking out the door.
I sat down in the car a felt tears start to well up in my eyes. No I’m not crying over a boy like him.
Almost on cue I got a text ‘hey its jake. I know its kinda late but if you want you should come over for a movie night kinda thing –J’
I quickly sent back ‘I’d love that xx –A’

Notes

I liked this one. So the next chapters are going to be pretty.. eventful? if that's the right word.
Well what did you think?
So this is kinda like a side note but I'm basing the Jake character off of Connor Franta (If you don't know who that is go on YouTube right now and find him because he's amazing) but anyways he's going to have that upbeat personality and stuff so yeah.
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@LouisLady



@Boobear and Nialler's Bitch
I agree with both of you its just to good to come to an end soooooo fast. PLZ keep going.

@LouisLady
I agree this story is to good to come to a end so quickly xxx

I love this story and checking everyday for an update. I'd rather wait for your writer's block to clear and continue on. Just love this story.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/21/14

please try, sorry if I sound demanding.

It was perfect.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
2/6/14