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Immortal life

Chapter 7


Louis's POV
"Who are you? “I asked, looking around the room, my arms bound to a chair by rope, and my wrists were beginning to get rope burn. Because of this, my senses were going crazy, trying to identify who had done this. Who had tied me up, who had brought me back into the spotlight against my will, who could bend Rachel to his/her will?

I smelled he air around me, and I smelled....
No....

It can't be....

We got rid of him....

There's no way it could be...

"So, you finally know who I am? “A sickly sweet girly voice called, with a familiar icy tone.

"But, you’re a girl-"

"My name is Valarie, you killed my dad, and I can make you pay." A redheaded girl, about 5'0" girl stepped out, and smiled a cruel smile, revealing fangs. She spoke again, with the same tone, “I’m the daughter of the vampire and an alpha female of Zayn's old pack...I'm half werewolf, half vampire, and nobody has found a way to kill me."

“what do you want with me?” I questioned.

“like I said you killed my dad and you took Zayn away from our pack, we want Zayn and you dead” she said in a sickly tone. “or maybe I should put you through hell”

“how did you get me?” I asked.

“It wasn’t hard we put vervain in your system whilst you slept and took you away and brought you here” she shrugged.

“so why is it just me here we all did something to kill him” I said.


“you were my dad’s main target the first one turned you were the main piece Louis, it was always you haven’t you realised it was you who was turned, you were the one who crushed your best friends hand, you were the one who had their vampire took over them, you got your friends in danger and you were the one, it’s always you” she said dragging her long finger nail across my shoulder.

“why me?” I asked.

“you’re the strongest but also the weakest you were hard to get to but once we got you it was easy, your stubborn but an easy target, fast but not fast enough”

“maybe I could just turn you into a half vampire half werewolf and make you suffer every full moon”

“no, no I will not become one of those” I said struggling against the vervain ropes.

“think about it you’ll be faster, stronger, more powerful your senses will be stronger than all of the boys combined, you will be indestructible, unstoppable, Louis we can start something a revolution, we can take over both worlds the vampires and werewolves it will be great!”

“no I won’t” I said my struggles became distant as she grabbed my by my hair and leant into my neck.

“soon you’ll be like me the most powerful supernatural on this planet” she breathed into my neck before biting down.

I shot up out of bed falling against the wall, I stood there in cold sweat looking around before realising I was still at home and the boys came running in mine and Eleanor’s room.

“we heard a bang what happened?” Liam asked.

“nothing everything’s fine” I said.

“why are you standing against the wall and your covered in sweat” Zayn said.

“how could y-“

“I can smell it” Zayn said.

“wait where’s Eleanor?” I asked.

“her and Rach went out to get something to drink” Niall said.

“Lou what happened?” Harry asked.

“just a dream” I said.

“a nightmare” Zayn said.

“yeah it’s weird I don’t usually dream but it seemed real” I said.
“real?” Liam said.

“yeah like I swear I felt her bite my neck” I said.

“what did you dream about?” Harry asked.

“this girl she said that she was the daughter of The Vampire and she was part of Zayn’s pack but she wanted revenge she was part vampire part werewolf she said something about me and then she bit me but I woke up I think she was going to turn me into a hybrid are they called?” I said.

“yeah hybrid is half and half like you can get a hybrid car it’s half petrol half electric” Harry explained.

“what was the girls name?” Zayn asked.

“Valarie” I said.

“I was never in a pack but yeah I knew a girl named valarie but I never knew she was a hybrid” Zayn said.

“well I’m fine anyway just go back to bed yeah I just want to go back to sleep” I said.

“Even though we don’t need sleep you sure do sleep a lot” Harry said.

“yeah I love my sleep so leave now before I vervain your sorry asses” I threatened both Harry and Niall darted out of the room whilst Liam and Zayn walked out, they both closed the door and I walked over to the bathroom.

I splashed my face with cool water before looking at myself in the mirror my eyes flashed red as I looked in the mirror before flashing blue again I stretched my neck out as pain ran through it but soon stopped after cringing over my dream, the feeling of her biting my neck still lingered. I ran my hand over the spot where in my dream she bit it, but I flinched in pain I quickly ran over to a full length mirror in my room and pulled my shirt off to see blood around the area and a large bite mark on the shoulder.

Notes

ok so this chapter was wrote by both me (@Emmaaaaa) and @J.J who is the new co author to this story since i can't really update since from this monday it will be 10 weeks until my exams and i really need to focus on them and get my grades up since when i did my mock exams i mainly got D's and i really want to get into this six form college so i really am going to start revising and that so i am going to have no time i might update during my next holidays which is in April for easter but it's just i'm going to be so busy but i hope you enjoyed this chapter :)

@Emmaaaa

Comments

@Emmaaaa
Hi. I love your stories , and I was wondering if you could add me as a co-author. I would like to be able to continue this story as it is a very entertaining topic. Reply or message me if you get the chance!
p.s. I could also help with revisions.
p.p.s. I know what it feels like having so much going on at school and stuff I have 9 periods and get out at 4:15 I know what it feels like.

@Harry's Kitty Kat
i'm sorry i'm not continuing with this story or any other fanfictions. i'm not writing anymore, i'm sorry i don't do this type of stuff anymore i've instead started up a blog (fashion, beauty & lifestyle) and i'm going off to college and i might be getting a job soon it's too much and i don't enjoy doing this stuff as much i'm sorry...

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
7/23/14

Please update this story! :(

Please date this story as soon as you can! <3

Omg this is killing me please update :*