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Immortal life

Chapter 4

Louis p.o.v

Another 8 slow years past and to be honest I was bored yeah me and El had some great times and had some fun but I was sick of hiding, it’s been sixteen years since we all supposedly died and everyone has started forgetting about us yes there will be the occasional song played on the radio or whatever from us but people don’t care. I haven’t even talked to the boys since they moved out I don’t even know if they’re ok. Are they even considered friends anymore? I sighed as I slowly made my way out of bed and walked though the house El was still asleep so it was just me and my thoughts.

I made my way to the training room well gym and started to punch one of the punch bags. After a few punches I kicked it and punched it some more until I got to the point where I punched it too hard and it went flying across the room, I picked it up effortlessly and hooked it up.

“Lou are you ok?” El asked. I turned around to face the door to see her standing there with a worried look on her face.

“I’m fine” I said punching the bag again.

“Lou stop punching the bag” El said walking up to me.

“what” I said facing her again.

“what’s wrong you’ve been acting strange these last few days but there’s been something different for a few years now” El said.

“I’m just bored I’m sick of hiding I’m sick of being in the same place and I’m just bored completely and utterly bored and I haven’t even got anyone apart from you.” I said.

“Lou you have the boys as well” El said.

“I don’t I haven’t talked to them since the moved into their new homes I only have you” I said.

“Lou it’s been sixteen years since your death you can probably go out and about now” El said. “I went out yesterday and no one even paid attention to who I was no one thought I was Eleanor Caldar not even the younger people they didn’t recognize me and i am presumably dead” El said.

“your right we can go In to town come on I need to get out of here, where should we go?” I said.

“London it’s been a while” El said.

“sure we can run there” I said

Niall’s p.o.v

“it’s great to be out and about again” I said walking through the streets of New york with Rachel whilst we were exploring the shops and city.

“it was a good idea to dye your hair back brown less people will recognize you” Rachel said messing my hair up.

“It’s been sixteen yeas no one would remember me” I laughed we walked into forever 21 for Rachel as she picked out more than a few outfits which she made me carry, as we walked around the shop the music changed to one of our songs a woman in her early 30’s her daughter asked her a question about this song, the woman replied saying it was her favorite bands as a teenager, the daughter asked if they still sing and the mum replied by saying no unfortunately they were killed in a car crash. Rachel grabbed my hand and took me away from listening to her conversation.

“sorry about that” I said.

“it’s fine now wait here I have to go and try these on I’ll be out as quick as I can” she said she kissed me on the cheek and walked away as I stood outside the changing rooms waiting for her. That same woman with her daughter walked up to the changing rooms but before entering she looked at me she looked confused but she waited out here.

“excuse me” she said.

“yes” I said.

“I’m sorry to ask but you look quite familiar” she said.

“i often get asked this question” I lied.

“oh do you?” she asked.

“yeah I do a lot of people think I look a lot like that guy from that boy band I don’t know his name but they were pretty big in 2013” I replied.

“you mean One Direction” she said.

“yeah I get compared to that Neil is it?” I said.

“Niall and yeah you look a lot like him you even have the Irish accent” she laughed.

“yeah people keep comparing me to him and it’s weird if he was still alive wouldn’t he be like 40” I said.

“yes he would are you in anyway related to him because you do look like his twin” she said.

“I don’t think I am I mean he never had a kid right and he died” I said.

“yeah it’s just weird sorry I bothered you” she said walking away, Rachel walked out looking at the woman who was walking away from me.

“what was that about?” She asked.

“she was asking me if I was related to Niall Horan she said I look like his twin well almost” I said.

“at least you got her to believe you weren’t” she said.

“yeah I know now are you going to buy those?” I asked.

“yeah that’s why I brought them out” she said.

“let me pay” I said as we walked up to the register.

“no you already paid for you apartment I’m not letting you pay for these as well” she argued.

“no come on let me pay I want to treat you” I said.

“no” she said stubbornly I gave the woman my card and Rachel gave me daggers.

“You two are a cute couple” the woman said.

“thank you” I said. As we walked away.

“Rach how do you think the boys are?” I asked.

“I’m sure they’re fine” Rachel said.

“it’s been so long since I talked to any of them” I sighed.

“you guys are just living your lives Ni” she said rubbing my back.

“I miss them” I said.

“I miss them too” Rachel said.

“do you think they forgot about me?” I asked.

“no they wouldn’t have” Rachel said.

“then why haven’t we kept in contact?” I asked.

“everyone is just busy starting their lives ok why don’t we try to meet up with everyone?” Rachel said.

“that sounds good” I said

Notes

ok so here is a new chapter this week from tuesday till friday i have my mock exams so i really need to revise for these exams so i won't be updating until friday well might not be depends if i find any time to i just need to balance revising and time for myself this week along with everything else soo i'm sorry for putting it on hold but these are quite important

@Emmaaaa

Comments

@Emmaaaa
Hi. I love your stories , and I was wondering if you could add me as a co-author. I would like to be able to continue this story as it is a very entertaining topic. Reply or message me if you get the chance!
p.s. I could also help with revisions.
p.p.s. I know what it feels like having so much going on at school and stuff I have 9 periods and get out at 4:15 I know what it feels like.

@Harry's Kitty Kat
i'm sorry i'm not continuing with this story or any other fanfictions. i'm not writing anymore, i'm sorry i don't do this type of stuff anymore i've instead started up a blog (fashion, beauty & lifestyle) and i'm going off to college and i might be getting a job soon it's too much and i don't enjoy doing this stuff as much i'm sorry...

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa
7/23/14

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