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Lucky

All for the better

Kaci's P.O.V.

I woke up noticing I was in the hospital bed I looked over seeing that Rayden was still asleep. I looked at the time on my phone it said 12 so I decided to wake her up. I walked over to Rayden shaking her nothing, I shook her harder, nothing I did not know what was happening so I pushed the button. The doctor came in quickly.

"what seems to be the problem"

"I don't know she won't wake up"

I saw the doctor take her mobile x-ray machine and x-ray her head. She saw that the concussion was more serious than we thought.

"I think she might be in a comma"

"what no that can not be"

"it can be possible she has a minor concussion so it might off put her into one"

"ok but do you know when she might wake"

"in a month or so"

I got out my phone sending texts to everyone.

To: Simon, Lilly, Liam, Harry
From: Kaci
The doctor says her concussion is minor and that it put her in a comma she might not awake for another month or so

I locked my phone and put it in my pocket then, I looked seeing that the doctor was going to be running some tests seeing how bad her comma was and giving her medicine I was excussed out of the room to the waiting room. When I got out there I saw everyone.

"what are you guys doing here?"

"we came to see if she was alright"

"she can't have any visitors now they are running some tests to see how bad it is"

I saw Liam crying and the rest supporting him. I walked over and sat next to him I got into a hug and started talking.

"Liam she will be alright stop crying"

"no she will not its all my fault I should of helped her move into her room then she would not be in this situation"

"Liam don't blame your self it was just a accident she is going to be ok"

"listen Kaci I am sure she never told you this but she like gymnastics she is really good at them but never tryed out"

"are you kidding me she wants to go to gymnastics"

"yes she has shown me what she can do she is good"

"ok thanks for telling me"

I can't believe my sister want to go to gymnastics hearing for Liam she is good. I continue to wait in my chair until the doctor came in she pulled me and Liam into the room. I could see why Rayden was still in a deep sleep but Liam might be able to pull her out. I saw Liam go by her side talking to her and holding her hand.

Liam's P.O.V.

I was told that I could take Rayden out of her comma since I am so close to her. I walk up to her bed and sit in the chair next to it. I place her hand in my hand and talk.

"Rayden sweetie it me Liam I don't know if you can hear me but I miss you and I hope you get better please I just need you to awake for me I love you"

After I said that nothing happened no movement nothing I was pretty sad. It was about 5 so Kaci and I decided to leae and go back to Simons house I saw that Simon was making arrangement for Rayden to be deported to his home hospital stuff and all so if she does wake up any time between no and a month than she will be home she is already like a sister to me.

Notes

Hey I decided to update

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bye -Brit

Comments

thanks and I was just bored and started this story as my first I only get to update more than once on weekends and no school days thank goodness today I don't have school but my mom has to babysit my friend and his brother and trust me I am keeping my door locked all day.

update update

I just updated it

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I am now writing it almost done