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Review #3
RATE: 6
good: the story had good content
improvements: SPACE DEM PARAGRAPHS. It was so hard to read! If you wanna see examples look at my story screwed up and read some chapters. But you can fix that by just a press of the return button
@tellmetomlinson
aha no probelmo :) thx for the review :)
5/8/14