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Review #10 and 11
You have really good content! Spacing is good.
small grammar and spelling issues sometimes.
i really do wish you had longer chapters cause I like reading long chapters that make me feel fufilled with the story.
rate for both:7
Notes
GUESSS WHAT
I AM MEETIN BETHANY MOTA ON SATURDAY I AM CRYING!!!
i love her and I amazing a poster and everything I love my dad!!
@tellmetomlinson
aha no probelmo :) thx for the review :)
5/8/14