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Dear One Direction

In Chapter 1 you keep going back and forth between "I" and saying "Georgia." Either keep it as her P.O.V or third person.

Chapter 2; In the second to last sentence it says, ".. made two days ago and eat it." It should be "ate it."

Also re-read your chapters before updating them to fix your capitalization errors and try to make your chapters a little longer with more details.

6 out of 10

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Can you review my stories "Indigo Romance" and "Anonymous" please? :)

hvrrystyles hvrrystyles
1/26/14

Can you do Directioner games? :)

FutureMrsPayne FutureMrsPayne
1/4/14

Please do You're Baking My Love, Bakery Boy. If you can't that's fine. I will understand.

Love_Life3 Love_Life3
1/4/14

Thank you so much :D

SNOW SNOW
1/4/14

hiii could you review my stories "It's Not What It Looks Like" and "The Wanted Girl"? Thank you love xx

RealityRuinedMyLife RealityRuinedMyLife
1/4/14
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