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Hiding The Cracks

You have a few capitalization errors going on.

In Chapter 2, you typed a sentence, ".. latest My Chemical Romance and begin." It should be "began" not "begin." The tenses are different. Also some grammar errors. Before posting your new chapters, re-read them to make sure they don't have errors.

Try to make paragraphs instead of typing them all together as 1 paragraph because it's harder to read since it's kind of long.

7 out of 10

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Can you review my stories "Indigo Romance" and "Anonymous" please? :)

hvrrystyles hvrrystyles
1/26/14

Can you do Directioner games? :)

FutureMrsPayne FutureMrsPayne
1/4/14

Please do You're Baking My Love, Bakery Boy. If you can't that's fine. I will understand.

Love_Life3 Love_Life3
1/4/14

Thank you so much :D

SNOW SNOW
1/4/14

hiii could you review my stories "It's Not What It Looks Like" and "The Wanted Girl"? Thank you love xx

RealityRuinedMyLife RealityRuinedMyLife
1/4/14
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