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Okay. I log in and find out that 2 of my subscribers stopped subscribing. So I'm taking a break from the book, because I'm really trying! Please tell me what I'm doing wrong! I seriously put a lot of effort into making it interesting, so tell me what I need to fix, please. As soon as I get a co-writer, I'm not gonna be updating as often. So I really need to know what's wrong.
o.k. so just givin' u tips
1:make the story more suspensful.
2:get into more details
3:be more descriptive
4:explain more,dont repeat details,give a little twist at the end
5:finish off the chapter with the reader wanting to know more of whats going to happen and getting them excited 4 ur next update
i hope it goes well for you(; update soon!(:
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