Saved
Summary
Zara was saved by heartthrob Harry Styles…but she's not a fan. So Zara thinks it's simple; she got kidnapped, he saved her. But to Harry…it's much more then a rescue. It's a chance to find out something he's always been wondering about.
Characters
Harry Styles
Hi. It's Harol–er, Harry. You can call me Harold, but, Sara calls me that. And I don't need everybody saying Harold. Honestly–I prefer Harry.
Jason Blee
Okay. I'm okay with giving out information about OTHER PEOPLE–but myself? Nuh-uh. If you think I'm gonna tell you 'bout me, you're crazy.
Sara Greens
Hi. I'm Sara. Well, there's not much to know about me. I'm 18, like Harry. And, talking about Harry–he calls me Sara, but my real name is Zara. Oh, and, you should know that my dad is in the Army, so we moved around a LOT, and that's why I'm a language whiz.
o.k. so just givin' u tips
1:make the story more suspensful.
2:get into more details
3:be more descriptive
4:explain more,dont repeat details,give a little twist at the end
5:finish off the chapter with the reader wanting to know more of whats going to happen and getting them excited 4 ur next update
i hope it goes well for you(; update soon!(:
1/13/14