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Demented ➳ h.s [Editing Starting Soon]

Summary

Navarro Mental Hospital For the Criminally Insane.

Cigarette butts rested in the ashtray. That ashtray placed in the corner of the room, excluded from the outside world.
A book lies next to the ashtray with the same page always marked.

Always.

His curls are pushed back to reveal a face perfectly carved and painted as if he were a masterpiece.
He fiddles with the pages of that same book while he watches the day disappear over and over again behind the walls of Hell.
His body; masked by an orange, jail jumpsuit, but it's no secret his body was as perfect as his face.

He found her annoying.
But she didn't want to leave.

"You can't love me," he mumbled while she pushed his hair back. "Do I ever listen?"

Sometimes a broken heart is good for the mind and soul. It helps you see that the world isn't perfect, that everything isn't okay.

Sometimes a broken heart shows strength. Because you were strong enough to go through it and move on.

Warning: sexual themes, drug and alcohol use, language, and minor abuse

Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Styles nor do I own Ariana Grande or any other celebrity mentioned in this story. I own the plot and the original characters and would appreciate it if you'd not steal my material.

Inspired By: The Harry Styles fanfiction, 'Psychotic' on Wattpad and the Harry Styles series, 'It Takes Patience' by XOXOH

© 2014 wonderful .

Characters

Celia Edwards

Celia Edwards

Charlotte Huntington

Charlotte Huntington

Elizabeth "Liz" Martin

Elizabeth "Liz" Martin

Harry Styles

Harry Styles

Chapters

Comments



babyyob babyyob
9/22/15

@Hopeless Directioner
Actually, the whole summary is different. I made up a quote that may or may not go into the story and just the basic summary isn't even a summary, it's suspenseful. Again, I hope you like the new version as much as you liked the old.

svmmertime svmmertime @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
5/18/14

@Hopeless Directioner
Some will be minute but most will be obvious. Some conversations are edited so that Harry is more closed up. All in all, the story will be longer. There is a new introduction and just a bunch of things I wasn't comfortable with. A lot of editing was needed and the cover was terrible. And so, the edited first chapter is up along with a new introduction. I really hope you like it, darling x

svmmertime svmmertime @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
5/18/14

@wonderful .
I'm excited to see how it'll be revised! Will the changes be minute or obvious?

Hopeful Directioner Hopeful Directioner @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
5/18/14

@Hopeless Directioner

I will be editing and taking out and adding in parts. Honestly, Demented went waaay too fast in my opinion, and with the plagiarism and all, I found that I really want to rewrite it anyway. I will obviously be keeping this version up but I have already started the new version and the whole first chapter is different. I just think the story could have stretched at least to 35 chapters or more. Again, this WILL stay up, but the new version will be posted separately. Mind you, it will take at least a few months for me to do it since I have other stories, but I'm sick from school today so I'm going to continue. I was hoping everyone would like that it's being revised and bettered a bit, do you?

svmmertime svmmertime @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
5/16/14
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