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Finding Love

Chapter 5

Vanessa's POV

While I was waiting for Lily I grabbed my kindle fire and tried to decided which book to read for now. I soon settled on Wild Cards after about ten minutes I heard a knock knowing it was Lily. I bookmarked my page and put my kindle in my school bag along with my phone. I walked downstairs and grabbed my moms credit card. I opened the door to find Lily playing her phone. She looked up from her phone and at me.

"Well it took you long enough." She said with a smile.

"I took like two minutes." I said closing the front sort and making sure it was locked.

"Whatever. Do you have any books?" She asked.

"Just my school books." I replied.

"Okay let's go." She said to me.

"So are we going to your house first or the mall?" I asked.

"My house because I am not wearing this to the mall." She said. While I have her a weird look. "Why are you looking at me like that?

"Because what you're wearing is fine." I said laughing at her.

"No it's not because I wore this to school." She said.

"So?" I said.

"I can't let anyone see me in the same clothes I wore at school. No one wears the clothes they wore to school after school. Duh." She said acting like a drama queen.

"Ok let's just go." I said smiling.

"Okie dokie." She said and back out of my drive way and started to drove to her house.

Notes

Well it's back. Yayy!! Hope you all like it. Don't forget to go back and read all the chapters over. Okay. :)
-Megan

Comments

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
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@dontjockmystyles
Thank You!! I just followed you on Wattpad. :)

Rate: 8.7

I like your plot on how this girl is in this popular click but is not accepted, and 'only there because they pity her'. Since it's only 5 chapters the story hasn't even begin to grow, so i can't criticize on much! Your story all together (grammar, vocabulary) is okay! (: I like how you go into detail on some of her actions. And all in all it has a pretty good setup.

The only downfall is the super short chapters! :( I wish i could read more!

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