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Finding Love

Chapter 4

Vanessa's POV

About an hour after I started my new book The Selection. I got bored so I decided I would call Lily. After the third ring she picked up:

(V= Vanessa L=Lily)

L: Hello

V: Hey Lily

L: Oh hey V what's up?

V: Can I come over again tonight?

L: V you know you out always able to come over you don't have to ask. Did your mom go to the bar again.

V: Yup she's there right now.

L: I'll pick up now if you want. But don't bring any books this time.

V: But Lily I'll be bored when you fall asleep.

L: I'll stay up with you this time.

V: Ok. By any chance can we go to the mall?

L: Yeah girl! You know I never turn down the mall.

V: Haha. Ok bye I'll see you in a few.

L: Ok bye.

(End of phone conversation.)

Yes! Thank you so much Lily!

I ran down and grabbed my moms credit card. Mom this is going to hurt. I probably wouldn't have done this if you were around more and loved me like a mother should.

Notes

I finally got to update!! YAYYYYY!!!!!!!! Hope you girlies liked it. Sorry it's so short. :(


Comments

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Woo! I'll follow you back (:

@dontjockmystyles
Thank You!! I just followed you on Wattpad. :)

Rate: 8.7

I like your plot on how this girl is in this popular click but is not accepted, and 'only there because they pity her'. Since it's only 5 chapters the story hasn't even begin to grow, so i can't criticize on much! Your story all together (grammar, vocabulary) is okay! (: I like how you go into detail on some of her actions. And all in all it has a pretty good setup.

The only downfall is the super short chapters! :( I wish i could read more!

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&&& Read my stories! (Voted you a 10, because it's mean to vote under it.) (:


dontjockmystyles xx.

yes i like it so please keep updating

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12/29/13

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