Story Reviews

I would rate this story an 8.5. Not for any particular reason, I think it's mainly because the plot goes a little bit fast. She meets him, they go on a date, start dating, this all happens within a few days. She just met him! I love the plot though, don't get me wrong. It is so interesting to see what her memory reveals to her and what she remembers. Harry is also really sweet in this one, too. The grammar and punctuation and everything are great, it's really easy for me to read the story. I would read more, it's not my number one favorite story but it's definitely in my top 10-15!

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