Story Reviews

This story is so cute already and it only has two chapters! I just had to say that before I get really started. I would rate this story already about an 8.5, I can't really be sure what I can rate it because, as I said before, there are only 2 chapters so far. The story has a pretty good plot, and the characters are introduced well. There's not much else I can say except that the grammar and punctuation are good :).

Notes

Please rate my 'story' so I know how I'm doing! Please be honest, I promise I won't be offended :P And I still need more requests so if you have a story or you know of a story I can review then can you please give me some suggestions? That would be fantastic!