Story Reviews

I would honestly rate this a 9.5. The reason it doesn't get a full 10 is that she forgives him a little bit too easily in the beginning. If I were in that situation I wouldn't forgive him. Although, considering the whole scary movie thing I think it's a little bit more justifiable. Other than that, this story has a got it all. A great plot so far, great characters, a great pace, and so far nothing too traumatic has happened, which I love. Just a bit of advice for people who are going to read this who haven't- stay with the story even if you can't stand any grammar errors. There are a few grammar and fluency errors in the first couple chapters but it evens out as the story goes on and the story actually gets really good. Just a little warning.

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Hope you liked it! Thank you @Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn for recommending their story to me! I will definitely be reading more of it! Please rate this 'story' (don't know what I should really call it) so I know how I am doing. That would mean a lot to me :)