Story Reviews

I would rate this story as about a 7. The plot is decent, but there are too many elements to it and it is so fast paced! I also don't like the fact that neither of them want good jobs or to go to college, they just want children. I personally think that making that decision isn't very good because if you can't find a good job you won't have enough to raise your child as well as you could. Also, deciding to have children when you have cancer when you are a senior in high school? Also, the mom's reaction to everything that she and Harry do is really accepting and happy. I mean, having a mom that will support you in everything that you do is really great, don't get me wrong, but if my mom caught me making out with my boyfriend on the couch when she just got home she would freak out and start screaming at me. Also, I don't think that normal mothers would ask the age, name, and gender of your baby that you are having at 18. They would freak out and ask you why you did that. Just saying.

On another note, the grammar and spelling are really good. :) I like the characters, no one is terrible besides maybe Kayla, and every one is nice and friendly, with very few flaws. Overall it is just a little fast paced and unrealistic. I would still read more of it though!

Notes

Sorry this one is a little negative, I just said what I thought needed to be said. Please rate and subscribe is you like my reviews, and I need suggestions for more stories!