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Story Reviews

Why Are We This Way

I would honestly rate this story so far about an 8.5. There are only a few chapters, so it's kind of hard to tell what will happen, but I am liking it so far. I am generally not into the whole futuristic type thing where the boys have broken up and they have families, but I think that the reunion tour thing made it so that I liked it. The story is moving at a great pace, and the introduction of the characters is pretty good. Some grammar and punctuation errors, but overall well written. Some of the sentences are a little bit short, making it a little bit awkward to read sometimes, but it doesn't take too much from the story.


Notes

If anyone wants to request a story for me to read, please do it! I have winter break coming up and I will be able to read a lot! :)

Comments

@meep_its_1d
Ok

@SarahAndAliceTwinSisters101
Ok I'd be glad to :) Keep in mind though, I haven't written one in a while so I may be a bit rusty...

meep_its_1d meep_its_1d
3/9/14

the hit list

@Naomi Storplikson
Yeah of course! Thank you for the recommendation :)

meep_its_1d meep_its_1d
1/16/14

HI. Can you review my story: I survived with 1D?
I might come back and ask you to do one of my new story's that is not up yet.