
Story Reviews
It's Not What it Looks Like
I would rate this story an 8.5. This is only because she is a bit angry at everyone, and I already have a stressful enough life as it is, so it doesn't really make me enjoy the story as much (that is my personal opinion, she doesn't really kill anyone, so it's fine). The plot is very original, and I like the way she starts patching up her previous arguments and fights with the boys near where the story is currently updated to. The spelling and grammar is good, and I definitely like the main character and her sister, who is so supportive of her older sister. I really like that.
Notes
Sorry it's been so long since I updated, I've been super busy. I'll read as many stories as I can this weekend. As always, recommend stories for me to read, rate honestly so I can see how I am doing, and subscribe if you like my reviews!
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Ok
3/9/14