Story Reviews

I would rate this story a 9. I almost cannot describe how good this story is, but I will give you a review anyway. I'll start with the parts I don't like as much about the story. I think that sending your child to a different country just because she went out when she was told not to, even if she drank, is a little much. Also, I think the plot is moving a little bit fast, I mean she and Harry had literally known each other for about 2 days before they started dating. Parts I do like about it far outnumber the parts I don't love about it, though. I really like how the main character, Lina, stands up for herself and is really funny and witty and smart. I also absolutely adore the aunt, because she is so cool and she obviously cares about her life and Lina, but can also have fun and eat ice-cream. The characters are switching sides a lot, and it really adds to the plot. I think there were a few grammar/punctuation/spelling mistakes, but not enough to be memorable. I think what I would recommend is to slow down their relationship a bit because it is going really fast. Other than that- great job!

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