Story Reviews

*THIS STORY IS ON HOLD!* I just thought I would say that so I didn't get your hopes up too much if you wanted to read it and it wasn't updated or something. This is pretty short so far, and I can't really tell what is going on, the plot, if we have met all the characters, etc. I would rate this story so far an 8.5, mostly because of the spelling/grammar errors and the fact that she made such a poor choice in friends and that human beings should do better things than choose their friends badly. I understand it is probably for story and character purposes, but that is my personal opinion. I really like the main character overall, though. I also really want to find out her back story, because it seems pretty interesting. If I was to suggest that the author do anything, it would be to proof-read the chapter before you publish it. It will make everything a bit more smooth :) I really like it so far, though!

Notes

My ratings are back down again! I am not offended or anything, but if you don't like what I am writing then tell me how to get better please :) It would help me so much. Also, please keep recommending stories, I am reading them as fast as my schedule will allow! Please subscribe if you like my reviews.