Story Reviews

I would rate this story a 9.5. The plot was really good, and it makes me feel every emotion that Campbelle is feeling in the story. The flashbacks in the story really add to the plot, and give you the background. I wish that Eleanor wasn't so weird and annoying in the story, but I understand it's part of the plot. The thing that makes this story a 9.5 and not a 10 was the fact that there are some spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes. Sometimes I can barely read a sentence because words are placed in weird places and things. I would suggest reading the chapter over once, twice, or a few more times than you are already if you already are reading through your chapters. It would really help catch some of those mistakes, and make it easier to read. :) I just have to say, this is one of my favorite stories now, so people-- read it!

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