Story Reviews

I would rate this story a 9. The plot is really interesting, and the character introduction is really cool and unique. I have never read a story where anyone has the problem that Liam has in this story, where he gets so angry no one can control him. It is quite fascinating to read, because I never know what Liam will do. I also think that Liam and Ally's friendship is really cute. She is really loyal to him, which I think is really nice to read, because most stories are really sad and there are a lot of broken friendships and stuff. Basically, this story is really really good, I just think that the fear factor in it, the fact that I don't know if Liam will hurt someone or do something really bad, is what makes this a 9. Really great plot, though. Good punctuation and grammar, also, which makes the story a lot easier to read.

Notes

Sorry that this one is so late! It got requested ages ago, I just didn't get around to reading it :/. Please vote honestly so I can see how I am doing! Also, story requests are really great too, and if you like my reviews please subscribe! :)