Story Reviews

I would rate this story a 9, even though it only has 4 chapters. This story immediately grabbed my attention from the first chapter, and then held it for the next three. The plot hasn't developed enough for any judgement, but the introduction of characters was good. There weren't any grammar or punctuation mistakes that I noticed (great job!). The main character kind of reminds me of myself, which I think is pretty cool. Also, hearing her talk inside her head about people and things is really funny and interesting. Keep doing that :) Note: if you are go.ing to read this story- if you are uncomfortable at the mention of rape, don't read. It doesn't have actual rape in it, but it is mentioned quite frequently

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