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Story Reviews

Devil in Disguise

I would rate this about an 8.5. This is kind of a supernatural themed story, and I'm not too into that, but it was good. The beginning was a bit slow to get going, and I almost stopped reading it, but I'm glad I pushed through. The plot started advancing and getting more complex a few chapters in. I really like the characters, and the story line is great. There are some spelling errors, not too many to the point where the story becomes hard to read, but just enough to be noticeable. I don't like vampire stories, again, but this one really caught my eye and now I have a love-hate relationship with this story. For people who like vampires, this would be a definite must-read for you. :)

Notes

Please keep recommending stories! Also, if you could rate my story honestly please do, and subscribe if you like it? If you rate low, please comment on how you think I could do better. It means a lot to me :)

Comments

@meep_its_1d
Ok

@SarahAndAliceTwinSisters101
Ok I'd be glad to :) Keep in mind though, I haven't written one in a while so I may be a bit rusty...

meep_its_1d meep_its_1d
3/9/14

the hit list

@Naomi Storplikson
Yeah of course! Thank you for the recommendation :)

meep_its_1d meep_its_1d
1/16/14

HI. Can you review my story: I survived with 1D?
I might come back and ask you to do one of my new story's that is not up yet.