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Best Day Of Our Lives! @Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn

Im a sucker for stories like this! But...... there is occasional incorrect gmarmmar and I think that,you should have the characters think more. It helps you learn more about a character when they react to experiences and compare old ones to new ones. Plus, it's just less boring. Rate:8.7

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Comments

Can you review "when I met him"?

thanks

no rush!

Evelynmalik2
5/13/14

Please review The Girl Who Waited. ~Belle~

taptomusic
12/30/13

Can you review Broken? :)

hvrrystyles
12/30/13

Not Finished Yet

Rated: R

Co-Author: Emerald Girl

Please Read! Its brand new!

Thanksa vry much!

Erin_Elizabeth_Direction
12/23/13

Could you review my story "The Fire n His Eyes?" and possibly y one shots if you have the time to read those, if you don't then that's fine. Thanks love.