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Okay, I really like the story. It's not to cleched and has great grammar, spelling, etc. It is a bit cheesy, but you could fix it up by making there be less sobbing and more like, painful thoughts. If you do that then the readers will feel like they are going through it too. I have always loved the stories about memory loss though, so you got me there. :) Please keep up the good work and continue writing! Rate: 8.5-10

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I am not a professional. Please do not take these reviews personally. Chow <3