
Bad FF moments + Reviews....
dESCRIBING
Describing.
Don't you hate it when the author feels they HAVE to describe that character EVERY five seconds?!Ex:
The Doncaster boy smiled at me.
The tan boy asked,
"How are you doing?"
The green-eyed, curly haired, Holmes-Chapeled, huge-handed, lean-bodied, boy said,
"Hey."
Me: This is just not...... just no..... -.-
You're copying UniqueMOFO! Please stop it, she's a great friend of mine and I'd appreciate it if you stop copying. come up with your own ideas please!
12/30/13