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The Exchange

Frozen

Alyssa's Point of View

"Oh my god, Harry," I looked at him smiling, "this is perfect."

"I just thought, you know, you like being out here..." his words trailed off, still nervous from the reaction I would give him.

"It's amazing."

I can't believe this. He knows how much I love being out here but I never expected him to do all of this for me. These historical sites are what keep me going. They're the reason I love this town so much.

We're at my favorite site, on top of a battle hill where the Union tried to attack the Confederates. Of course the Confederates has the advantage, holding their ground where we're sitting atop this hill. But somehow the Union still defeated them. I think that's why I love this hill so much. Even though the Confederates had the advantage, even though they were bigger than the Union, the Union used their smarts to win.

Harry pulled out small speakers and plugged in his phone for some music. Ed Sheeran, Teagan and Sarah, Ani DeFranco, and a few other artists were played. We weren't very hungry so we laid on the blanket looking at the stars. It's easiest to see the stars from here; there are no buildings and no lights to take away the night sky.

"This is the best party I could've asked for Harry," I kissed him on the cheek before sitting up, leaning back on my hands.

"I know," he smiled, sitting up with me.

"Wait! Harry! We're not allowed to be out here! It closes at five!"

"It's okay, I got in contact with one of the owners and they said it was fine. They said we just have to be gone by two and it's only 12:30."

I relaxed feeling even better about tonight. I normally wouldn't mind sneaking around but I don't want to ruin a wonderful party like this.

"Are you sure you're having fun here?" I shifted my weight on my knees, "I mean, there's no alcohol or loud crazy music, or dancing."

"I wouldn't want anything else. Besides, we can dance," Harry switched to a new song, a slow song and stood up, bringing me with him, "may I have this dance?"

I smiled, "of course Mr. Styles," we danced and laughed, spinning in circles and trying not to step on each others feet. I rested my head on his chest, "this is amazing Ha--"

I cut myself off pulling away from him.

"What is it?"

"Shh!" I said quietly getting on my knees and crawling a little bit up the hill.

"Alyssa, what are you doing?"

"Get down!"

Over the hill was a deer, two...no three deer. I've never been so close, "I don't know if that's a good idea. Won't they attack?" Harry asked worried.

"Of course not!" I crawled closer, only ten feet away from them. One turned it's head as I stood. I made no other movement, just smiled.

After standing for a good two minutes I took another step closer and then another step. They stared at me, not making a sound. They were just as frozen as me. I've tried so hard to get close to them during the day but they never let me.

"Alyssa, be careful."

I ignored Harry and took another step. Two of the deer took off but the other watched as they ran off and then looked back at me. I slowly raised my hand holding it out. And then the most magical thing happened; it walked to me. I didn't touch it, I didn't move; I simply let it stand a foot away. I let out a small laugh, and it almost sighed? Taking one more step towards me I reached out slowly, touching it's head. A deer, after ten years of trying to get close, let me pet it.

I looked at Harry, far away from me and smiled, "Harry, look."

"I see baby, I see."

Shortly after the deer ran off, I ran back to Harry, jumping in his arms. This night really is the best.

Harry's Point of View

"
That was crazy," Alyssa said as I nibbled at her neck, "I can't believe it let me get that close."

"I know, I was surprised," I chuckled as I spoke on her skin.

All that was left was my collared shirt--half way unbuttoned--and my pants. Alyssa's straps were down and I just finished unzipping her dress. Will tonight be the night? I brought condoms just in case but I'm not forcing anything.

We sat up so I was straddling her thighs. Her arms slithered around my neck, pulling at my locks. I ran my hands down each of her sides and then went back up, grasping one of her breasts. She sighed, enjoying my touch.

She took off both of my shirts, the collared and the white-t underneath and then began unzipping my pants.

"Alyssa?"

"Yeah?"

"What are we doing?"

She laid back down, pulling me with her, ignoring my question. I don't think she's quite sure yet. My length grew and it felt so good rubbing in between her legs; especially when she tensed up and moaned.

I ran my hands down to her hips and pulled up her dress. Thank god it's flowy so I can easily flip it away from where I want to be. When I reach her thighs I pulled at each one, kissing, sucking, biting each one. I pushed them apart and ran my hand over her moist body. A thong, perfect.

She grabbed onto my hair tighter and I pulled it off quickly and inserted my tongue. Another moan but louder. Out here she can be as loud as she wants, no one could hear her for miles and miles. I moved around, feeling her insides. I looked for what makes her moan the loudest, what makes he flinch the most. I found it and heard her breath begin to speed up,

"Harry I....I want....just please," she doesn't have to ask twice.

I reached into the basket as she pulled my pants and boxers off. The condom slid on perfectly and I kissed her lips, giving her time to think about what we're about to do.

"Are you sure you want this? You can't take it back Alyssa." I forced her to look at me, preventing our kisses. She looked me in the eyes and ran her hand down my cheek. She nodded her head. After another few moments I smiled and spread her legs apart with my knees.

"Okay," I slowly, very slowly touched her with my erection; normally where my tongue would go. I don't want to hurt her but she's tight, so tight. It's going to hurt.

I slid in slowly, and saw her biting her lip, trying to stop herself from screaming. I want her to scream though. When I was half way in I pushed hard the rest of the way. She finally let out a scream; half pain and half enjoyment.

"Harry, oh my god." I chuckled and moved slowly again, I've heard it doesn't really feel that great the first time because it hurts so bad so I'll try to move slowly and gradually go faster.

We moved in sync breathing slowly, this feels amazing; I've wanted to do this for so long.

Alyssa wrapped her legs around my waist making it feel even more enjoyable. That made me move faster, making her moan louder, and making me feel my orgasm coming.

"Harry, faster...please, faster," I smiled and went as fast as I could, both of us close.

"I'm about to cum Alyssa, I need you to scream for me," and she did, she screamed loud forcing her orgasm at the same time as mine. I pulled out and collapsed on top of her, she laughed. Thank you lord for her not regretting it--not yet at least.


Alyssa and I slept in our own beds tonight. I don't know if it's because she isn't having bad dreams or if she just needs time to think. Regardless, I wish she'd sleep with me anyways. I've never felt more comfortable with a girl but if we do this again we'll need to be careful. Her parents are here and our friends can't find out. Marilyn knows about us but no one else can; if this gets out we'll never be able to be together.

I think I love her, I can't lose her over something like this.

Notes

Ding, ding, ding, we have two winners: @Lazylazerpants and @curls-lover
That means another update later tonight :)

Hopefully you enjoyed there little ron-de-vu (or however that's spelled) and please comment below!

subscribers and votes are also lovely <3

ps- I've tried a million times getting close to the deer near my battlefields. The closest I've gotten is about 7-8 feet. I'm so jealous of Alyssa!

Comments

@Hannah!
I'm not sure yet! I'll have to see where it goes because it will be a little different.

Irish Gal Irish Gal
5/26/15

Will you be doing a sequel for the new version?

Hannah! Hannah!
5/26/15

@Hannah!
The sequel was taken down a while ago because it wasn't going very well...the new version will be on Wattpad soon if I have a few comments letting me know they want it!

Irish Gal Irish Gal
5/26/15

I would read the new version

Hannah! Hannah!
5/26/15

I can not find the sequel for The Experience. Do you still have it and where is the new version of this story?

Hannah! Hannah!
5/26/15