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don't let me go back

chapter 4

kenzie pov
omg i'm hanging out with uncle liam and there something i really need to tell him.

nail pov

i'm so worried what if something happens of the night i told that he has to stay the night she screamed yes. what why would she say yes does she not like me or just she want to get away from me and then doorbell rang i opened it and it was liam kenzie ran up and hugged him he lifed her up and said wow you are light as a piece of popcorn she smiled and then she laughed so hard well i got to go i said and gave kenzie a kiss on her cheek and then she hugged me and said i love you and i'm so excited to see my uncle not to get away from you. i said i love too and she said i love you more i said i love you most then she hugged me again she you win this dad but i will get you. i laughed and then i thought omg she called me dad i left then and then and they left too.

liam pov
liam she asked me yes i replied i have a feeling that were going to be more then uncle and niece were going to be friends i turned and looked at her and said ya we are all the sudden i crashed into a car she was not fine we had to go to the hospital nail was looking at her and he started to cry and i did to and then i thought were not going to be friends anymore then the nurse said laim kenzie wants to see you in private i walked in a started crying really hard she looked at me and sat up then she started crying of the pain i helped her and then she said liam were are going to best friends yes i can trust you i we were true friends i will never stop trusting you and there something that i have to tell you but you can't tell not event even my dad nail i said yes she started saying that a boy asked her out but her is on some one else what shoulds i do and i don't break his heart please help i say well i'm not going to tell your dad because he would crush his bones idk what to don she hugged me and i lifted her and she whispered in my ear i love you forever and she hugged me and i said i love you more and then she whispered i love you most then i kissed her on the cheek and then on the lips but not in that way it was like an uncle thing then she said your my only best friend and you will be forever then i broght her out and then the nurse said she looks like she is ready to go so she went on to nail and said farther daughter dance tonight it starts in 2 hours and i need to get ready nail said your already to go you look always beautiful

kenzie pov
when we got home i had to take liam into the bath room and then i asked what happens if i ask my crush out no liam screamed then nail walk in and he said what happened walked in saying i said nothing then i said to liam why not? he looked at nail and then i said thats right then i hugged liam

Notes

Comments

@Niall's_Princess
yes i know ok i'm working on it

Loui's_Girl Loui's_Girl
12/9/13

Kenzie, this is really hard to understand, you spelled Liam's name wrong in the character thing. To make things easier to understand, spell things correctly, use quotation marks (") when someone is speaking, and make sentences flow.