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I Should've Kissed You

She's Awake?

"Talia?" I give a small smile and tell him to come on in. He sits on the bed next to me. I see his blue shirt is wrinkled and under his beautiful eyes are dark, dark circles. "Talia. You really scared me.. I thought I would never get to hear your voice again." My heart hurts. "Niall, I'm so sorry." I say softly. "No, you couldn't help it. But I stayed here until I was sure you were going to be okay," he says as his finger makes small twirls on the hospital sheets. "You didn't have to. You should've gone to a hotel or something. That chair doesn't look comfortable at all." He looks up at me as he says,"I said I'd never let go of you. I won't." I can't stand it anymore. I love him. I hug him as if he'll vanish into thin air. He's startled, but he hugs me back. As I pull away, I hear Louis ask Liam,"She's awake?! Well, where did you put the balloons, Liam?! Hurry up!" Niall laughs and I stay silent just to listen to him. Louis, Liam, and Zayn come to the doorway and ask how I am. "I feel much better. How do I look?" I say jokingly. Niall immediately says, "Gorgeous." Seeing that no one else answered, he blushes and stares intently at his shoes. The boys chuckle as they walk out, leaving Niall and me alone again. "Niall?" "Hmm?" "Have you ever had something too good to be true, and you're terrified that you'll wake up and see it's all a dream?" "Yeah.." I stare at my lap and whisper,"Niall. This can't be real. Sometime soon I'll wake up and you'll be gone forever." Niall's hands come over to mine and he locks our fingers together. "You are too beautiful and sweet to ever be sad or lonely. Alright? You mean the world to me and I couldn't stand to lose you. Please don't ever think that you're less than perfect." He lifts my scarred wrist to his lips and kisses it. "Promise?" Niall whispers. "Promise." Just then, a nurse in purple scrubs knocks on the door frame, then walks in. "Hey honey. You can go on home now. Hope you get to feelin' better." "Thank you so much," I say. When she leaves, Niall decides to call my parents to see if it is okay for him to drive me home. They agree. It's already midnight when we arrive at my house. As he walks me to the door, I ask him if he wants to come in. After hugging my parents and letting them see I'm alright, I show Niall my room. Its nice to know my parents trust me. As I drop my things on the bedside table, I decide to call Bailey. I feel horrible about the accident. After making sure she's feeling better, I walk over to Niall, who is looking at pictures on my dresser. My hands are on my temples. This headache just won't go away. Niall picks up a picture of my brother and me, looks confused, and asks,"Who's this?" I drop my hands to my side. "That's my brother." "Oh." He sets it back in it's place. "You thought it was a boyfriend, right?" He chuckles,"Yeah.. So, how many boyfriends have you had?" I hesitate to answer,"Actually, I've never had one." Niall's face lit up when he heard that. I had to giggle. Oh my gosh.. My head feels like a lead weight. I see two of Niall. The floor is rocking back and forth underneath me. Niall steps closer to me and asks, "Are you okay?" I answer by collapsing in the floor in front of him.

Comments

well I don't want to basically write your story for you but they should find her dead

Makenzie  Horan Makenzie Horan
6/19/13
@MakenzieHoran
actually I wrote that she overdosed on sleeping pills, which is lethal. so she committed suicide, and the last chapter was her suicide letter. I was using her point of view the whole time, and I guess I had a hard time writing because Niall had died and the whole story revolved around her and Niall..

well just was so good . But she didn't die she just got in a comma

Makenzie  Horan Makenzie Horan
6/18/13
@MakenzieHoran
well, I could. what do you suggest?

Are going to add more cuz,it's so interesting.

Makenzie  Horan Makenzie Horan
6/18/13