
How to save a life *Put on hold until i get comments/suggestions*
And you are?
My heart was racing, i couldn't breath. He was hitting her, all she did was let it happen, i tried to scream. But all that came out was air. I opened my eyes immediately. i took in my surroundings. i looked to my left to see a very sexy boy sitting next to me.
I looked at what i was wearing. Shit like this always happens to me, hot guy, gotta be wearing some bags. Ugh. He looked up and saw i was awake. " Hey there, um I'm Louis, I um.. saved you.." I tried to speak but my voice wouldn't come.
" Oh!" I'm sorry, he left the room for a minute and came back with some water. " You might need to refresh your vocals." i took the water gratefully and took a long long sip of the water, before i knew it the whole thing was gone. I cleared my throat. " H-h-h-h-hi." i said my voice still a bit rusty.
" I'm Jessica." I said. he nodded and took a seat. " Um do you know who i am?" i looked at him for a bit, and shook my head. " Stranger danger?" i questioned him. " No no no no, i was drivin in my bus with my mates i heard a car honkin, no one was on the road so we pulled over and we found you, you were so cold and i didnt know if u were asleep or dead. I saved you."
Crying was stupid because no one was gonna tell me it was okay, or tell me not to cry. 'My name is Louis its going to be okay.' I wasn't dreaming. I felt a jolt go through my body, my stomach started to ache. " How ling have i been here?" i asked.
" Only 2 days." I nodded.... 48 hours and he was still here why? " Why are you still here?" he looked like he was confused. he sighed and leaned back in his chair. " I stayed because i wanted to make sure you were okay." Louis. What a name. i wonder what the rest was.
" You are Louis...." " Louis William Tomlinson." he said. " And you are?" he asked. " I am Jessica Lily....Formerly Hughes. I'm getting a divorce. Stupid mistake of marrying a high school sweetheart." " Ah." he says. The tv was on and Beyonce was singing Single Ladys.
How cliche. " So the doctor said you need to rest a lot, hes gonna send you home. So i will drive you to your home if thats alright." he said dragging me from my thoughts. " That would be great but.... I don't have any where to live at the moment. Its why i was driving i was going to go to a hotel but the snow..."
I felt embarrassed. i was practically homless. " You can stay with me. Besides my house here in New York is lonely. No questions asked." I think about it. What's the worse that can happen, he rapes me? Oh he could rape me any day any time, that body of his... I could feel my underwear beginning to get wet.
" Thats fine with me i say. He grins and says he is gonna go sign me out. i get up and change back into my clothes.i didn't have a bra in and i heard Louis voice. " Well you are good to-------"
" Um..Louis can you grab my bra, it was on the floor and i honestly didnt mean to drop it. He was speechless. " Earth to Tomlinson...." " Oh sorry." He grabs my black and white striped bra and hands it to me. i put it on and slide a shirt on.
" Those scars on your back...." Louis trails off. " No questions asked if i recall someone saying." He nods and we walk out together. We get in the elevator and we are standing so close to each other.... " SIngle?" I ask him. " At the moment yes." He says.
He see him eyeing my breasts and i turn to kiss him but he is already a move a head. He lifts me up, i wrap my legs around his hips and wrap my arms around his neck. His fingers dig into my ass, his lips are on mine and a moan escapes. i have never been kissed like this.
I could feel him pressing into me slowly has he grew. His tongue was moving in and out of my mouth. When i caught his tongue i sucked on it long and hard. He moaned against my lips sending a incredible feeling through my body.
The elevator was about to open and he set me down quickly. We pretended like nothing happened and walked out.. i could tell Louis was frustrated... His buldge was quite noticable now that i could see. " Where is your car?" i ask. " Its the Audi right there." he points and my eyes go to the Black Audi R8.
Just like Christian Grey.... Oh the elevator.... Ana and Christian... Ohhh.. " Shall we?" He says, dragging me away from my fantasys of Christian Grey putting me over his knee. He opens the passenger side and coaxs me in.
He closes the door and i feel very well respected. It was a nice change. " Next stop, my house." Louis said and i listened as the engine started on this beast.
I looked at what i was wearing. Shit like this always happens to me, hot guy, gotta be wearing some bags. Ugh. He looked up and saw i was awake. " Hey there, um I'm Louis, I um.. saved you.." I tried to speak but my voice wouldn't come.
" Oh!" I'm sorry, he left the room for a minute and came back with some water. " You might need to refresh your vocals." i took the water gratefully and took a long long sip of the water, before i knew it the whole thing was gone. I cleared my throat. " H-h-h-h-hi." i said my voice still a bit rusty.
" I'm Jessica." I said. he nodded and took a seat. " Um do you know who i am?" i looked at him for a bit, and shook my head. " Stranger danger?" i questioned him. " No no no no, i was drivin in my bus with my mates i heard a car honkin, no one was on the road so we pulled over and we found you, you were so cold and i didnt know if u were asleep or dead. I saved you."
Crying was stupid because no one was gonna tell me it was okay, or tell me not to cry. 'My name is Louis its going to be okay.' I wasn't dreaming. I felt a jolt go through my body, my stomach started to ache. " How ling have i been here?" i asked.
" Only 2 days." I nodded.... 48 hours and he was still here why? " Why are you still here?" he looked like he was confused. he sighed and leaned back in his chair. " I stayed because i wanted to make sure you were okay." Louis. What a name. i wonder what the rest was.
" You are Louis...." " Louis William Tomlinson." he said. " And you are?" he asked. " I am Jessica Lily....Formerly Hughes. I'm getting a divorce. Stupid mistake of marrying a high school sweetheart." " Ah." he says. The tv was on and Beyonce was singing Single Ladys.
How cliche. " So the doctor said you need to rest a lot, hes gonna send you home. So i will drive you to your home if thats alright." he said dragging me from my thoughts. " That would be great but.... I don't have any where to live at the moment. Its why i was driving i was going to go to a hotel but the snow..."
I felt embarrassed. i was practically homless. " You can stay with me. Besides my house here in New York is lonely. No questions asked." I think about it. What's the worse that can happen, he rapes me? Oh he could rape me any day any time, that body of his... I could feel my underwear beginning to get wet.
" Thats fine with me i say. He grins and says he is gonna go sign me out. i get up and change back into my clothes.i didn't have a bra in and i heard Louis voice. " Well you are good to-------"
" Um..Louis can you grab my bra, it was on the floor and i honestly didnt mean to drop it. He was speechless. " Earth to Tomlinson...." " Oh sorry." He grabs my black and white striped bra and hands it to me. i put it on and slide a shirt on.
" Those scars on your back...." Louis trails off. " No questions asked if i recall someone saying." He nods and we walk out together. We get in the elevator and we are standing so close to each other.... " SIngle?" I ask him. " At the moment yes." He says.
He see him eyeing my breasts and i turn to kiss him but he is already a move a head. He lifts me up, i wrap my legs around his hips and wrap my arms around his neck. His fingers dig into my ass, his lips are on mine and a moan escapes. i have never been kissed like this.
I could feel him pressing into me slowly has he grew. His tongue was moving in and out of my mouth. When i caught his tongue i sucked on it long and hard. He moaned against my lips sending a incredible feeling through my body.
The elevator was about to open and he set me down quickly. We pretended like nothing happened and walked out.. i could tell Louis was frustrated... His buldge was quite noticable now that i could see. " Where is your car?" i ask. " Its the Audi right there." he points and my eyes go to the Black Audi R8.
Just like Christian Grey.... Oh the elevator.... Ana and Christian... Ohhh.. " Shall we?" He says, dragging me away from my fantasys of Christian Grey putting me over his knee. He opens the passenger side and coaxs me in.
He closes the door and i feel very well respected. It was a nice change. " Next stop, my house." Louis said and i listened as the engine started on this beast.
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this is really good you should keep it going
10/19/14