
How to save a life *Put on hold until i get comments/suggestions*
Trapped
My eyes flutter open, the car is bright. Its White. I exhale and I can see my breath, it is so cold. i try to start the car, but it fails. At least music is playing. Imagine Dragons Radioactive was on. I cross my arms and try to open the door, it doesn't budge. I start to kick at the window, nothing. I was trapped in the snow.
I did the only thing i could, I screamed and honked my horn until my hands started hurting. I sat there to cold to tired to cry. i crawled in the back seat and took my crowbar i always have insid ethe car and tried getting to the back to my bags, i had clothes in there that could help me stay warm. I heard a loud crack after a while. I smiled happily.
I pulled it back and grabbed my bags, it was getting colder.i quickly threw on layer after layer. I snacked on my snacks.
I really needed to find a way out. I took the crowbar and worked at the trunk. i stopped and decided i should rest. As i layed there listening to music i had time to ponder. Evan loves me still, i just don't love him. I don't want to have kids because... i can't have any. i try to sit up fast but end up hitting my head.
I rubbed it and moved to the front to continue my annoying assult on the car horn. I heard cars passing, no one cared. Maybe they couldn't hear. i broke, i cried. i sobbed until i had nothing left to give. I sat up, my phone, where is it? i looked and looked, i found it by the pedals.
My heart sunk, no service. That was it then wasn't it? The end, i was going to die out here. Why did ever think that i could get out of high school early and get married? i laid my head on the car horn and let it ring. No one was going to save me.
I was going to die in this car. No one was coming. Crying was stupid because no one was gonna tell me it was okay, or tell me not to cry. I tried not to fall asleep but i did. i dreamt that i could get prego with my husband. I had nightmares as well, like my husband was evil like my dad. Choking me, hurting me. i tried to wake up but i couldnt. i heard a voice, then voices. British i think.
One stood out, " My name is Louis, its going to be okay.... ummm wake up? I'm gonna make sure you are okay."
I did the only thing i could, I screamed and honked my horn until my hands started hurting. I sat there to cold to tired to cry. i crawled in the back seat and took my crowbar i always have insid ethe car and tried getting to the back to my bags, i had clothes in there that could help me stay warm. I heard a loud crack after a while. I smiled happily.
I pulled it back and grabbed my bags, it was getting colder.i quickly threw on layer after layer. I snacked on my snacks.
I really needed to find a way out. I took the crowbar and worked at the trunk. i stopped and decided i should rest. As i layed there listening to music i had time to ponder. Evan loves me still, i just don't love him. I don't want to have kids because... i can't have any. i try to sit up fast but end up hitting my head.
I rubbed it and moved to the front to continue my annoying assult on the car horn. I heard cars passing, no one cared. Maybe they couldn't hear. i broke, i cried. i sobbed until i had nothing left to give. I sat up, my phone, where is it? i looked and looked, i found it by the pedals.
My heart sunk, no service. That was it then wasn't it? The end, i was going to die out here. Why did ever think that i could get out of high school early and get married? i laid my head on the car horn and let it ring. No one was going to save me.
I was going to die in this car. No one was coming. Crying was stupid because no one was gonna tell me it was okay, or tell me not to cry. I tried not to fall asleep but i did. i dreamt that i could get prego with my husband. I had nightmares as well, like my husband was evil like my dad. Choking me, hurting me. i tried to wake up but i couldnt. i heard a voice, then voices. British i think.
One stood out, " My name is Louis, its going to be okay.... ummm wake up? I'm gonna make sure you are okay."
Notes
***********************************************************************************************************Sorry i know these are really short for chapters, i just wanted to get to the point and i hate dragging on about the same things over and over again.
this is really good you should keep it going
10/19/14