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The Back-Stab

Chapter 2

Louis POV


"What do you think." came a voice behind us.

We turned around. "Their good," said Niall.

We walked out of the mall entering the car. " I like that girl P-P-P,"

"Penny," said Jamal," and you know I went out with her and still like her."

"Yeah, thats her name," said Niall."I don't understand why you would dump her, she is so hot."

"Hey I did what I had to do at the time. It seemed like a good idea." Niall responed.

"Anyway, did you guys see um- the way Cleo was smiling at us. You could see all of her beutiful pearly whites" Harry said.

"Yea, she is cute." said Liam.

"You know that the girl Lex is the cutest, Zayn said.

"Yeah," Louis said.

As we arrive at the concert, we see Penny, Cleo, and Lex. We get nervous about how we are gonig to....

"Okay superstars, time to impress." Simon sayed behind us.

As we walked on stage, we saw them cheering in the front row. We started to sing songs from our new album. We asked the girls onstage. The crowd was cheering and the curtin closes.

"Wow that was cool," said Cleo.

It was getting close to the time- my thoughts were interupted by the girls screaming when they saw Ed Sherran.They ran over to him screming his name.

"Can we have your autograph," asked Lex

"We should go" said Cleo

Then they started for their car.

"Its time," Said Liam.

Then we ran up to their car right before they opened the door. Then knocked them out...

Notes

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Comments

plz update I love it

directioner0502 directioner0502
3/26/14

One thing that might help is if you make the chapters longer. Make some more things happen or put in some more detail or something. It took me like thirty seconds to read each chapter... Can't wait to see what happens next!!

directioner1234 directioner1234
1/26/14

That is so sad but plez update soon..

louisgirlfriend louisgirlfriend
1/24/14

Sorry to hear about all the rude comments you got, I don´t think that´s fair :)

Love your story, and don´t listen to the rude comment´s it´s you that have decided to write this story, and how it should be and if they don´t like it then they shouldn't read it.

But all I can say, keep on doing the good work :)

Love xx
Ida

DanishGirl DanishGirl
1/22/14

Plez update soon